After finishing my essay I can tell what I did well, okay, and not so great on. I think I did really well with conjunctive adverbs, for example here's one from my essay that I think I did great on "Some may say that Obama is more persuasive; however, my view is that Trump’s speech is the more persuasive because he uses a lot of loaded words as opposed to glittering generalities to bring people together against common enemies." Something I didn't do as well on but I believe I did okay was introductions to quotes "Obama’s central insight is “ I stand here today grateful for the diversity of my heritage, aware that my parents' dreams live on in my two precious daughters.”"
and lastly something I didn't do well on was my hook, I don't think it flowed well with the rest of the essay "President, Donald Trump, is one of only five presidents to have never been elected to public office before becoming President."
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